Friday, April 24, 2020
Show Not Tell
Friday! a couple of days ago we wrote about something walking through the woods we got to choose anything we wanted a chose a grizzly bear. We had to show not tell which means we describe the things around us/the story, I described the bear and the woods do you have a favourite animal?
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Hi Mikayla, My name is Lucy and I am a student at marshland school. I think your writing is Amazing and really Descriptive. Maybe next time, you could not say what the animal is so that they get intersted in wanting to find out what the animal is.
ReplyDeleteBut other than that, I love your writing.
Keep up the great work
Hi there Mikayla
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your grizzly bear story. You used a lot of descriptive language and great spelling. Well done. I think my favourite animal is a monkey because they are so playful and a bit human like and I think that makes them really fascinating!
hi Mikayla
ReplyDeleteI love all the ways you described what you could see around you in the story. My favourite animal is a fox, it's a bit cheeky.