Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, May 1, 2020
The Three Words!!
A Couple Weeks Ago, My Literacy Class had to write a story but we had to include three words there 4-6 words we could have chosen from I think, I chose "Banana, Lamp & Pony" then I combined it into a story. Do you have a favourite word?
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You are doing a great job of your writing Mikayla. I'm enjoying reading your stories, they are all very different and original. How are you enjoying your writing?
ReplyDeleteKia ora Mikayla
ReplyDeleteI like how you incorporated your 3 chosen words into your story. Remember to take the time to proof read your writing for punctuation. You chose the word 'noticed' instead of 'saw', well done!
hi Mikayla
ReplyDeleteDo you like ponies? You wrote 'some like banana peels' so I'm guessing you know a bit about them. Cool little story. Remember to proof-read it too!