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Thursday, April 16, 2020

Lockdown Writing


School In Lockdown!! Today we did a writing object was that we had to write a fictional story on one of our parents but we had to use other real characters like (Grandparents, Aunty Uncles) like those I did it on my dad when he was a little kid and he wanted to be a professional soccer player when he was older. What do you want to be when your older?

2 comments:

  1. Hi Mikayla,
    What an interesting but sad story. It is unfortunate that some of our hopes and dreams don't turn out. But sometimes we become more resilient when things don't go our way.
    Your writing is always nice to read, you have a mature way with words. Keep it up!
    When I was a kid I wanted to be an All Black or a Black Cap. They didn't come true but I am happy to be a teacher.
    What do you want to be?

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  2. Hi Mikayla,
    What a lovely message you have in your story. I am sure that your dad is now proud that he always tried his best. I am very impressed at how you have presented your blog using the Think 6 model - keep at it!
    When I was a kid I wanted to be a Silver Fern playing dentist - that would have been a juggle!

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