Friday, March 27, 2020
Describing The Giraffes
Day 4 of doing school work from home, This time I described giraffes diving off a diving board there were 10-15 of them all running up and diving in, I watch a video of them doing it. Do you have a favourite animal? Do i need to add anything in
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This is really descriptive Mikayla and I like how youy have used capital letters at the beginning of each sentence. Maybe next time you could try not use 'they' as much.
ReplyDeleteWell done Mikayla. I like how you have used your senses when writing about the giraffes. Next time have a go at putting your writting into paragraphs as it will give you writing more structure.
ReplyDeletehi Mikayla, I really like how you described the giraffes, maybe you should not use "much" as much in your story. But other than that it is great, Well done
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