Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, August 30, 2019
3 lucky reasons
Hello. In Mr Bell's literacy, we are creating a bake sale sought of thing and we had to create 3 reasons why you should come and buy our product if u have a look through the slide you will see our three reasons so make sure you if go to Marshland School come and buy our product. Also, make sure comment on what I could improve!
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
great job i like your slide its really good but you need some pictures then it would look even better
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